The door shuts
behind you
and you sit down
at the banquet
and sit down
at the show.
Have you come to play a game?

All the pieces
are marked
all the
clues
will appear
one by two,
two by one,
running through the
weightless halls
of the manor.
You have come to play a game,
the killer and the killed.
Blood on white marble,
blood on shadowed wood,
blood on blood,
blood on fire.
The game has come to play.
Follow along, the string in your hands,
the song in your ears.
Eyes sharp, hearts dark.
The two travelers step through the door.
The door shuts behind them.
Open the game and play the blood,
sing tomorrow and hold back the flood.
Welcome to the Riddle Box.
I like the final third of the poem a lot. I think to increase the impact of the middle section, you should reevaluate your like breaks in the first third of the poem (leaving them shorter for the first time starting at the blood section).
Good advice, thanks!
My favorite line is “The game has come to play”
Thanks!