It’s happening…slowly, but surely. First grammar, punctuation fixes that my Alphas found — then onto the fun stuff, unpacking and clarifying certain action sequences [I’m looking at you, Sideways scene.] — then brand new scenes! Just a couple of small ones, that will hopefully clarify the plot, foreshadow the appearance of the Gray Witch a bit more, and clue the reader in on the central plot a touch more. Then the dragon tea party.