Gentle Denouement would be a great name for a film noir character.

Okay, the piece that I’m putting up this week isn’t really a short story at all. It’s from a much, MUCH longer piece of collaborative fiction that some friends and I have been working on for just over a year.

Across Golden Skies is basically the Season Finale capstone of a large section of the story — not the climax, but the gentle denouement. Mainly for the reader to have glimpses into the machinations of the villains.  So, don’t expect typical structure — probably best to view these as a series of scenes.

So my questions for you, kind reader, is do these work at all for you? Divorced of any context or knowledge about these characters do you find these intensely boring?

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