The bones.

I might’ve started very, very preliminary editing on the book.


And IF I did, it’s only a first read through — just getting a feel for the bones, and making tiny little notes at the most egregious things I notice.

Like the name of the town changing three times.

One character’s hair color changed RADICALLY from the beginning of the book to the end.

And so many adverbs…so many adverbs.

And things that are confusing.

But, the bones are there.

The bones are there.

You know, maybe.


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